Revise my outline
revise my outline with what i have feedback from the teacher
1- Any area highlighted in yellow represents material taken directly from a source without providing credit. Not acceptable. Provide the source or remove it.
2. Any area highlighted in blue represents an area for improvement in source citation and/or APA style.
3. Any area highlighted in green represents an area for improvement in grammar and/or spelling.
follow the instruction in the picture please