Business Writing Proofreading exercise

Depending on the context of the 10 statements, you may choose to use casual or restrained language.  Revised sentences need to be grammatically correct and use proper punctuation.  There may be examples that do not require any revision.  For these items, comment that the sentences do not require revision…hint: all of the sentences in this exercise need revising.  There may be several correct ways to revise the sentences!  Bulleted or numbered lists, omitting irrelevant information, and/or creative (but correct) use of punctuation are all acceptable approaches.  Good luck!

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