the American school life, writing homework help

This is my essay for my writing class. I am learning English and English is my second language. I wrote this essay because i need move up my level of classes. The topic should be” Why i should be allowed to move to level 4″.

Check my essay and see if i have any grammar mistakes or word chose unsuitable.

Check my title if you can think a better title for me.

check the essay for unitive.

This is important for me, please check it seriously.

Let me know if you have any question.

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