snapchat (1000 words), writing homework help

about snapchat , improve this hook and thesis to be qualified 

thesis  at the last couple of years, snapchat have made people’s privacy disappear due to posting their daily life activities whether it is the reality to be in touch or even what they want others to see how their lives are

hook, Many people think that social media have made us closer, in my recent observation i have found this to be true and complete the rest according to the pic that i will attach (option B ) and follow the instruction below