Please follow the professor feedback and fix the errors

Please follow the professor feedback and fix the errors


Feedback to Learner

Tone is sophisticated. This is written at a college level. Don’t pull any paleo diet crap with a dietitian teaching the class. Nice overview. Aside from the incorrect diet you have a good grasp of the topic.

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