Need Career Exploration Assistance , writing homework help

This is another assignment that is for the course I am retaken.  I didn’t score very well on this paper so it can either be reworded or rewritten with additional support.  The highlighted and red items in the paper is from the professor.  The paper is APA and I left out the entire header.  Any questions please let me know.   I have attached the old paper, instructions, and rubric. Also, if any information is used from old paper it would need to be reworded to pass plagiarism checks.

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