Analysis image of breast cancer using mammography, writing homework help

I wrote a paper on comprehensive analysis image of breast cancer using mammography. I have got the feedback from my Dr. and He sent some suggestions and comment that should be fixed on the paper. I would like you to read his comments and find the paper as attached. There are red lines that need to be edited and corrected. I have got some comments about the APA citation and I need it fixed.

Here below is the Dr explanation about the paper.

1- He said i should Expand a few of the sections and adding the transitions as well.

2- Further discussion of the methodology will help in allowing the reader to frame the purpose and scope of the study. Why was the test administered in this way? Were there other options? Why was this one chosen? (why we use ANOVA, T-test, U-test and Kruskal-Wallis tests not other type of tests?)

3- Broaden the conclusion, revisit the original problem statement and readdress and tie the discussion back to the argument. Conclude and bring the information you have presented into a smooth transition and ending for the reader.

4- Check your references per APA. Specifically the Bryfondski reference is not to APA standard.

Please fixed the Dr’s comments and add information to methodology as well as the conclusion so you add 3 to 4 pages to what i wrote.

Please be aware of plagiarism because it is taken seriously. This is 12 inches, APA style, Double spaces paper. please be aware of sources use good sites such google scholar and pubmed.