3 Tufts University Supplemental Essays (<250 words each). Need help

Hi everyone, I’m currently done with my second draft of the tufts supplemental however I still would like people to look over it.

I put the questions in bold. I’m looking for suggestions, constructive cristism, and someone to make sure that the context is correct. Any help will be greatly apperciated.

Essay Question: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1A4aTwGMPfguWWyEGTTYM0c9xVo_-W-wczwZNaLQxb58/edit?usp=sharing

If anyone is interested, please let me know.

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